Thursday, November 21, 2013

haiku -Myron Lysenko

teaching haiku –
I listen with interest
to what I’m saying

not trying to be funny they laugh anyway

dementia –
will my sister tell me when
my mother dies?

river ripples
tonight I must apologise
for being a sook

traffic noises
I still regret my anger 
From last week’s argument




"In last night's Creative Writing class we wrote haiku which were a combination of the objective and the subjective. It made the haiku and senryu we wrote more personal, more emotional."

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